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Kirin HR- 1
Posts : 9 Join date : 2011-03-10 Age : 31
| Subject: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:20 am | |
| Names: Satoshi Kirin Alliance: Independent Hunter Appearance:- Spoiler:
Biographies: A white hair pickled loving hermit , he is the son of a well known swordsman in his village . Inheriting his father's skills as a swordsman , he trained to be a swordsman but along the way he picked up an interest in using bowgun . One day in his village , a very rare elder dragon Kirin the White Brute strolled around as the sky filled with lightning . Couple of hunters approached against it but they were no match . His father who was a smart hunter used the sleep bombing strategy against the Kirin managed to overcome the beast but one of the lightning struck on his dad ending his life . On his father's funeral , people thanked him he left the village shortly after the funeral . He promised himself to become a hunter himself , he started his journey to create his own legend. His longsword is a katana left by his dad , he used it ever since his dad died . The katana was made from a special ore and forged with a rusted elder dragon Kushala Daora . He usually prefer to face a monster alone but under circumstances he fights in groups . The bowgun was a gift from a traveler he helped , it was made from an unknown source . Kill Tally: Leave blank for now. Weapons: Longsword and Light/Heavy bowgun . - Spoiler:
Name: Shunka Shotou Weapon Type: Longsword Upgraded From: N/A Appearance: Element Power: Raw Rarity: 8 Materials Needed: N/A Upgraded Into: N/A Description: The hilt has a flower shaped near the blade , the inscription on the blade indicates the inheritor of the blade . The blade is forged thinly making it a very sharp sword , it is a reverse edge sword . Style: When he is using his longsword , he attacks with a 3 chain combo roll and wait for an opening to strike again . While using bowgun he does almost the same only he attacks more . His style also changes as he faces different monsters . He can quickly adapt to other fighting style depending on the surroundings . At times he relies on traps and bombing , he also uses his father's style which is sleep bombing though he found the method hard to adapt . Special Modes: Leave blank for now. Charge Attacks: Leave blank for now.
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 11:11 am | |
| Niece character, but you may want to change a little the biographies, a lot of members put the story of the village attacked by the rathalos, also you must tell us what longsword and what bowgun you use, if it's a special one you must create it on the item creation section.
The rest is ok, maybe with more detail on the style, but what you wrote should be enough to be approved, also a very cool pick.
I hope your character gets approved soon, I recommend you that when that happens you should join the event or the topic "Morpheus dream" in the great forest. | |
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Kirin HR- 1
Posts : 9 Join date : 2011-03-10 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:21 pm | |
| I'll try adding some more if I get any more ideas , I'm all dried out . Ahh with the weapons do I create it after I am approved or before ?
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:38 pm | |
| Well, you can create them after, as I did, you won't have any problem, but you must tell how and why you have them, since you are supposed to have a beginners weapon, you can have a look to my character if you want to see what I'm talking about, if it's not clear or you have any other questions, just ask them to me.
You can find my character in the approved section, his name is "Abel, the wanderer". | |
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Kirin HR- 1
Posts : 9 Join date : 2011-03-10 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:43 pm | |
| Ah oke , thanks for helping me | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:52 pm | |
| nicely done, but you'll need to be specific about the power of the bowgun and create the katana, then you'll be approved for sure. | |
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Kirin HR- 1
Posts : 9 Join date : 2011-03-10 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:08 pm | |
| I'm out of ideas , maybe you can help me with the power of the bowgun ? As for the katana I'll take care of it later . | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:43 pm | |
| I don't know anything about bowguns so you should ask another users :/. | |
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Black Lagoon Moderators
Posts : 615 Join date : 2010-08-04 Age : 29 Location : Some Random, Unknown Place
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 5:06 pm | |
| I Cant See Any Problems With This.,, I'll Get Another Member Of Staff To Have A Second Look At It And See If They Can See Any Problems.,, As For The Katana And The Bowgun.,, They Will Have To Be Created In The Items Section... There, Me Or Another Member Will Look At Them And Approve Them Once Checked... If You Need Help On Creating Them, Feel Free To PM Me | |
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Kirin HR- 1
Posts : 9 Join date : 2011-03-10 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 5:24 pm | |
| - Abel X wrote:
- I don't know anything about bowguns so you should ask another users :/.
Haha k , bowgun is the shizz in MH (: - Black Lagoon wrote:
- I Cant See Any Problems With This.,, I'll Get Another Member Of Staff To Have A Second Look At It And See If They Can See Any Problems.,, As For The Katana And The Bowgun.,, They Will Have To Be Created In The Items Section... There, Me Or Another Member Will Look At Them And Approve Them Once Checked... If You Need Help On Creating Them, Feel Free To PM Me
Thanks Black (: I'll Pm you if I totally run out of ideas . | |
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Black Lagoon Moderators
Posts : 615 Join date : 2010-08-04 Age : 29 Location : Some Random, Unknown Place
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 5:27 pm | |
| I Know Alittle Bit About Bowguns, But Only From The 'Freedom' Series On The psp Your Welcome Screameman, You May Just Call Me BL | |
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Kirin HR- 1
Posts : 9 Join date : 2011-03-10 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 5:34 pm | |
| I play the freedom series (: Will do BL | |
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Mehaha Admin
Posts : 765 Join date : 2010-04-23
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Fri Mar 11, 2011 8:52 pm | |
| It seems okay with me... As for weapons... It's cool to add it directly to the APP so long as it's an aethetically different item... So if you want you can copy and paste the weapon that I approved than do so now. I'd actually prefer it that way. Anyways I'll be waiting for your approval. | |
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Kirin HR- 1
Posts : 9 Join date : 2011-03-10 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Mon Mar 14, 2011 6:15 pm | |
| Ahh k , I need to create another weapon . So I'll wait until my bowgun is approved then I'll add both of them ? | |
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Mehaha Admin
Posts : 765 Join date : 2010-04-23
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Mon Mar 14, 2011 6:51 pm | |
| You can put it directly in this APP... You don't need to make another APP unless it has a special ability... The having to post it thing is for weapons with special abilities or for characters that have been moved to the Approved Section... | |
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Kirin HR- 1
Posts : 9 Join date : 2011-03-10 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Mon Mar 14, 2011 10:53 pm | |
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Mehaha Admin
Posts : 765 Join date : 2010-04-23
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:01 pm | |
| I just copied and pasted it to the weapons section in the APP and now I'm gonna approve it... Why don't you join the special event? Could get yourself something fancy. And just for joining and posting more than 5 times I'm rewarding everyone with a free set of basic equipment! | |
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Mehaha Admin
Posts : 765 Join date : 2010-04-23
| Subject: Re: Satoshi Kirin The Hermit Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:01 pm | |
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