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PostSubject: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeMon Feb 14, 2011 3:07 pm

Name: Alatreon (called the Bringer)

Size: normal size x2

Lineage: Elder dragon

Description/Image:
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Element: all elements.

Status Inflicted: All blights, all status.

Weakness: Light

Attacks/Tactics:
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Carve List:: Dark scale 30%, Chaotic crystal 20%, Dark crystallized plate 25%, Crown of the dark lord (horns) 20%, Skylord jewel 5%.

rp sample: probably, I wont use this in the RP, but It will be a reference for Abels story. But if I use it it would be like "Abel faced the Bringer for the second time in his life, this time prepared to end with his travel, with the culmination of his revenge..."



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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeMon Feb 14, 2011 3:31 pm

Okay... Please put WIP [Means:Work In Progress] in the title and remove it when you're ready.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeWed Feb 16, 2011 11:42 am

Finished... I think
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeWed Feb 16, 2011 1:06 pm

You can't quite say it's the most powerful of it's kind you can say it is a very powerful Alatreon that destroyed a large village. Not a nation.

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that will bring harmony to the world with the ultimate destruction

You might want to remove that.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeWed Feb 16, 2011 1:30 pm

Mehaha wrote:
You can't quite say it's the most powerful of it's kind you can say it is a very powerful Alatreon that destroyed a large village. Not a nation.

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that will bring harmony to the world with the ultimate destruction

You might want to remove that.
Why I would want to remove that? It's just a fragment of an ancient tale about the eternal fight between harmony and chaos, destruction and creation. It's said that the Finisher will end with the world bringing harmony and that the Bringer will bring the chAos again by creation, It's just a tale, like the one you can read about fatalis in MHFU... And the nation that the Bringer destroyed, it was a very small one, like Andorra... And it didn't ONE SHOTED A WHOLE NATION, it destroyed lots of villages in a single day and the people ran away...
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeWed Feb 16, 2011 2:04 pm

Well you may want to specify that it's just a legend. And How it destroyed the nation and it's villages. Just don't want any thing to be misunderstood.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeWed Feb 16, 2011 3:10 pm

ok
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeWed Feb 16, 2011 4:43 pm

When it fires this "darkness" what is it made out of and how does it make it? Maybe with an Aura? Maybe with Dragon Element? Though you could do both. A Dragon Element Aura... It seems the most logical explanation for the "darkness" because it can't shoot actual shadows.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeWed Feb 16, 2011 4:47 pm

Well since it would be almost a god-like creature, it would be like... darkness... maybe it could be made of a concentrated dark aura. The Bringer as the legend says is the creature chosen to be the reincarnation of chaos creation and darkness, so it would be like it's blessed by darkness and because of that it has that aura.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeWed Feb 16, 2011 5:26 pm

I get the Legend... But it's a legend.

A Dragon Element Aura works just as well. You can have it the proper color and everything.

Darkness is a lack of light. So if it is made of darkness it implies that it can rip light out of specified areas on a whim which is broken. Plus none of it's attacks would actually work in the way you're describing.

It would benefit you MORE just to have dragon element because then it adds an almost mythical energy without being broken.

Plus you can cause status effects like Dragon Blight.

An element-less aura has very few applications because without an element they typically have no solidity. So a breath of element-less aura wouldn't even move your hair. I recommended it to help because I can't think of something else that would get this approved. You might be able to and if so let me know but I don't. Just helping out Bro.

Sorry for the LONG post I have a habit of overtly explaining things.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeWed Feb 16, 2011 5:28 pm

ok, dragon aura... BUT heavily concentrated dragon aura, or maybe all elements, to form a chaotic element attack?
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeWed Feb 16, 2011 6:59 pm

Sure... Alatreon already have the Element and most of the elements... Add water, change some colors, make an Aura and you basically have The Bringer. If that's what you want to do.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeThu Feb 17, 2011 11:03 am

Yeah, after all the Bringer is a very big Alatreon with very little differences, like the horns.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeThu Feb 17, 2011 12:20 pm

Under element just put "All Elements"...
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeThu Feb 17, 2011 2:06 pm

ok, thats quite logical, since the Alatreon is a monster that controls all the elements but doesn't get maximum profit of them, The Bringer would be one that masters them perfectly, getting the best possible result always from them and with the ability to fuse them.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeThu Feb 17, 2011 8:27 pm

Just something to role over in your head. You might want to mention that it can use it's elements on their own or in pairs, triplets, quadruplet or all together. So that way it can use various elemental attacks.

This seems like it'll have some really cool uses sorta like a super boss. Plus elemental fusions should be fun. I can picture it now. Fire+Water, Water+Lightning, ETC...
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeFri Feb 18, 2011 4:59 pm

Done
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeSat Feb 19, 2011 12:26 pm

This my friend is approved!
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeSat Feb 19, 2011 12:57 pm

Thanks!
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeTue Mar 08, 2011 12:28 pm

I'm really sorry about this but I have to temporarily revoke the approval because I just noticed the "can destroy medium sized villages" thing in dark orb...
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeTue Mar 08, 2011 12:37 pm

._. ...


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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeTue Mar 08, 2011 12:40 pm

If you edit it I'd be fine but destroying an entire village in a SINGLE shot...
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeTue Mar 08, 2011 12:43 pm

I know, that's why I gave the Black sun attack to the Finisher, I wanted them to have the same power.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeTue Mar 08, 2011 12:56 pm

Well that's understandable... But like I said it has to be balanced. A monster is yes supposed to be powerful. Strong enough to be able to hold its ground against even against 10 hunters but it still has to be defeatable. We do not make gods here but powerful creatures yes we have plenty of those.
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PostSubject: Re: The Bringer   The Bringer Icon_minitimeTue Mar 08, 2011 4:58 pm

Edited as you wished.
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