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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: The Bringer Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:07 pm | |
| Name: Alatreon (called the Bringer) Size: normal size x2 Lineage: Elder dragon Description/Image: - Spoiler:
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The Bringer is an ancient Alatreon that became very powerful, There is a legend that says that the Bringer is the reincarnation of chaos and darkness, but also the reincarnation of creation in opposite to the Finisher (also called "The last star"), son of the light, that will bring harmony to the world with the ultimate destruction, They are condemned to fight each other until the end of times. When it woke up from it's slumber it destroyed a nation in a day, village by village until the people ran away, that day is known as the Bloody Sunday, some people praise it but most fear and hate it, the ones who praise it search its nemesis to help it to destroy the Finisher. Element: all elements. Status Inflicted: All blights, all status. Weakness: Light Attacks/Tactics: - Spoiler:
The same than a normal Alatreon (those don't have the normal elemental power, the element of his attacks changes at the will of the Bringer, also this element can be composed with two or more elements) , but also includes:
-Dark flame:shots a powerful dark blast that sets nearby things on fire, although the ray is not composed by fire.
-Dark blow: it spreads darkness with a powerful movement of it's wings
-Dark slash: uses its tail to throw a powerful cutting blade made of concentrated darkness
-Dark falling star: goes high on the sky and lets itself fall to the ground involved by darkness, when it's close to the ground it opens it's wings and covers huge areas of the battlefield.
-Chaotic dark orb: concentrates all it's elemental power inside an orb, when it's fired and impacts, a huge elemental vortex of darkness is liberated, the violence of the chaos inside the explosion destroys even the ground, the chaotic vortex lasts for 5 minutes (10-15 posts) (but hunters that enter or are hit by the vortex are repelled and launched away from it) and causes all blights permanently (can be healed with objects), deals huge damage (huge < massive). Need 10 post to charge.
The dark attacks are made of a fusion of all elements. The bringer can fusion any of the elements in pairs, triplet, quartets, or all together. Carve List:: Dark scale 30%, Chaotic crystal 20%, Dark crystallized plate 25%, Crown of the dark lord (horns) 20%, Skylord jewel 5%. rp sample: probably, I wont use this in the RP, but It will be a reference for Abels story. But if I use it it would be like "Abel faced the Bringer for the second time in his life, this time prepared to end with his travel, with the culmination of his revenge..."
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Mehaha Admin
Posts : 765 Join date : 2010-04-23
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Mon Feb 14, 2011 3:31 pm | |
| Okay... Please put WIP [Means:Work In Progress] in the title and remove it when you're ready. | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Wed Feb 16, 2011 11:42 am | |
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Mehaha Admin
Posts : 765 Join date : 2010-04-23
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Wed Feb 16, 2011 1:06 pm | |
| You can't quite say it's the most powerful of it's kind you can say it is a very powerful Alatreon that destroyed a large village. Not a nation. - Quote :
- that will bring harmony to the world with the ultimate destruction
You might want to remove that. | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Wed Feb 16, 2011 1:30 pm | |
| - Mehaha wrote:
- You can't quite say it's the most powerful of it's kind you can say it is a very powerful Alatreon that destroyed a large village. Not a nation.
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- that will bring harmony to the world with the ultimate destruction
You might want to remove that. Why I would want to remove that? It's just a fragment of an ancient tale about the eternal fight between harmony and chaos, destruction and creation. It's said that the Finisher will end with the world bringing harmony and that the Bringer will bring the chAos again by creation, It's just a tale, like the one you can read about fatalis in MHFU... And the nation that the Bringer destroyed, it was a very small one, like Andorra... And it didn't ONE SHOTED A WHOLE NATION, it destroyed lots of villages in a single day and the people ran away... | |
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Mehaha Admin
Posts : 765 Join date : 2010-04-23
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Wed Feb 16, 2011 2:04 pm | |
| Well you may want to specify that it's just a legend. And How it destroyed the nation and it's villages. Just don't want any thing to be misunderstood. | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Wed Feb 16, 2011 3:10 pm | |
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Mehaha Admin
Posts : 765 Join date : 2010-04-23
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Wed Feb 16, 2011 4:43 pm | |
| When it fires this "darkness" what is it made out of and how does it make it? Maybe with an Aura? Maybe with Dragon Element? Though you could do both. A Dragon Element Aura... It seems the most logical explanation for the "darkness" because it can't shoot actual shadows. | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Wed Feb 16, 2011 4:47 pm | |
| Well since it would be almost a god-like creature, it would be like... darkness... maybe it could be made of a concentrated dark aura. The Bringer as the legend says is the creature chosen to be the reincarnation of chaos creation and darkness, so it would be like it's blessed by darkness and because of that it has that aura. | |
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Mehaha Admin
Posts : 765 Join date : 2010-04-23
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:26 pm | |
| I get the Legend... But it's a legend.
A Dragon Element Aura works just as well. You can have it the proper color and everything.
Darkness is a lack of light. So if it is made of darkness it implies that it can rip light out of specified areas on a whim which is broken. Plus none of it's attacks would actually work in the way you're describing.
It would benefit you MORE just to have dragon element because then it adds an almost mythical energy without being broken.
Plus you can cause status effects like Dragon Blight.
An element-less aura has very few applications because without an element they typically have no solidity. So a breath of element-less aura wouldn't even move your hair. I recommended it to help because I can't think of something else that would get this approved. You might be able to and if so let me know but I don't. Just helping out Bro.
Sorry for the LONG post I have a habit of overtly explaining things. | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Wed Feb 16, 2011 5:28 pm | |
| ok, dragon aura... BUT heavily concentrated dragon aura, or maybe all elements, to form a chaotic element attack? | |
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Mehaha Admin
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| Subject: Re: The Bringer Wed Feb 16, 2011 6:59 pm | |
| Sure... Alatreon already have the Element and most of the elements... Add water, change some colors, make an Aura and you basically have The Bringer. If that's what you want to do. | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Thu Feb 17, 2011 11:03 am | |
| Yeah, after all the Bringer is a very big Alatreon with very little differences, like the horns. | |
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Mehaha Admin
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| Subject: Re: The Bringer Thu Feb 17, 2011 12:20 pm | |
| Under element just put "All Elements"... | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Thu Feb 17, 2011 2:06 pm | |
| ok, thats quite logical, since the Alatreon is a monster that controls all the elements but doesn't get maximum profit of them, The Bringer would be one that masters them perfectly, getting the best possible result always from them and with the ability to fuse them. | |
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Mehaha Admin
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| Subject: Re: The Bringer Thu Feb 17, 2011 8:27 pm | |
| Just something to role over in your head. You might want to mention that it can use it's elements on their own or in pairs, triplets, quadruplet or all together. So that way it can use various elemental attacks.
This seems like it'll have some really cool uses sorta like a super boss. Plus elemental fusions should be fun. I can picture it now. Fire+Water, Water+Lightning, ETC... | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Fri Feb 18, 2011 4:59 pm | |
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Mehaha Admin
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| Subject: Re: The Bringer Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:26 pm | |
| This my friend is approved! | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Sat Feb 19, 2011 12:57 pm | |
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Mehaha Admin
Posts : 765 Join date : 2010-04-23
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:28 pm | |
| I'm really sorry about this but I have to temporarily revoke the approval because I just noticed the "can destroy medium sized villages" thing in dark orb... | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:37 pm | |
| ._. ... | |
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Mehaha Admin
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| Subject: Re: The Bringer Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:40 pm | |
| If you edit it I'd be fine but destroying an entire village in a SINGLE shot... | |
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Abel X Admin
Posts : 349 Join date : 2011-02-09 Age : 30 Location : Spain, in Costa Del Sol
| Subject: Re: The Bringer Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:43 pm | |
| I know, that's why I gave the Black sun attack to the Finisher, I wanted them to have the same power. | |
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Mehaha Admin
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| Subject: Re: The Bringer Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:56 pm | |
| Well that's understandable... But like I said it has to be balanced. A monster is yes supposed to be powerful. Strong enough to be able to hold its ground against even against 10 hunters but it still has to be defeatable. We do not make gods here but powerful creatures yes we have plenty of those. | |
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Abel X Admin
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| Subject: Re: The Bringer Tue Mar 08, 2011 4:58 pm | |
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