Draka slayer of Dragons

Draka Slayer of Dragons

Alliance:independent hunter

image

Bio:A hunter that Hasn't found a cause to fight so he works for no one and hunts for money to fiance his travling

fighting style: He carres a great sword into battle first trying to do as much damage as possible intel he is hurt to dangers levels then swiths to a sword and backs off to recover his health but with the smaler sword for defense.

would it hurt to edit This Character application to match the template provided in
https://monster-hunter.forumotion.net/characters-creation-f1/character-rules-t3.htm . If you need an example Tryhttps://monster-hunter.forumotion.net/approved-characters-f20/tobakado-inunui-the-rathalos-admirer-t2.htm#335

So, the title is for banishing a dragon that doesn't exist (that app was clearly not approved) to a place that doesn't exist, at least not in the Monster Hunter world (which is kinda important, this is a 'Monster Hunter' site), so unless your character has some crazy-ass OP power to send dragons cross-dimensions, then I don't see that happening.

And all the starting characters, other than the Followers, start with low rank equipment when they are first made, that get better as they hunt more. So, to start with armor and weapons that can defeat a dragon on an equal or higher level as a Fatalis (seeing as you made a 'dragon god' and all) isn't right at all.

Also, like Tobakado said, the Templates are there for a reason. The rules too, while you are at it.

I think Araska hit the nail on the head this time. But that's not to say the app is irrecoverable. Just re-write it in the normal format, keeping in mind that the character didnt start out epic, and you should be able to get farther along the path to approval.

I fixed it

Me again, don't worry, not going to be an ass now, and I apologize for being so before.

Anyway, You need a picture. The one you had before would be fine, unless you want something else now.

And, instead of Wanderer alliance, I think you might fit in more with the Independent Hunters. ((Here are the Groups))

Also, your grammar could use a little work. Most internet browsers have a built in, one click spell check.

I too apologize if i came on insultingly. this is not too bad now that it is fixed up a little... Araska is right here but to add: a picture is recommended not required... a brief written description will work.

Draka I look forward to RPing with you. First we'd need to see some sort of appearance. Either in text or a picture. I love to hear how people envision their character so that would be great to see. And it benefits you as that is a requirement anyways.

Though I understand the Bio it is a little confusing. If you could clear it up. Don't worry I'm good at these things so if you need help then simply ask. It's a hobby of mines to begin with.

And the fighting style is a little confusing. He heals by using a smaller sword. Do you mean heal stamina? Or his actual wounds? In the case of the latter that would need explaining. Well I hope I've been of use. Don't be afraid to ask in any way. I like to help.

I hope I have answered your upload picture question in the "Suggestion/Complaint" Section. If all else fails, just google an image, find its website, and do this:

[img]insert name of website here[/img]

does that help?

do that and you have the bare minimum needed to finally rp.

yes and this time i hope its fixed intell i change how i play or something

Great job man... I give it the thumbs up. I believe that means you are temporarily approved until a mod says yay or nay my good sir.

i say yays, start up a new topic and begin rp-ing. have fun!