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Subject: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar Sat Nov 06, 2010 4:53 pm
Size: 2700-2900 [Giant Class]
Lineage: Flying Wyvern
Status Inflicted: Paralyze, Stun, Waterblight, Iceblight,
Weakness: Thunder, Fire
Attacks/Tactics: Gurenzeburu, A flying creature it has many tricks in its sleeve. However this is the personal mount of Lorelei. The O-Gurenzeburu has grown accustomed to the cold as well though that isn't its favorite place to be. Its large spiked horn is a deadly weapon. The Highland, in which Gurenzeburu lives, is known for its rapidly changing weather; the lightning storms can even damage Gurenzeburu, should it be struck directly. O-Gurenzeburu is not only an accomplished swimmer but a powerful flyer as well. With air capabilities similar to Kushala Daora. Primarily carnivorous but since O-Gurenzuburu has a stronger stomach it can eat other edibles when necessary. Its most dangerous attribute is its ability to learn. It is actually really smart comparable to a human in some cases.
It's water attacks can cause Waterblight and Iceblight 1 post after someone is hit by them. But only in cold weather.
Roar - Ogurenzeburu's roar is stronger then a normal Gurenzeburu's. The lungs being stronger can compress the air before it's released. Its roar is like a solid wall. To add to the obvious advantages of it being a near solid wall it also causes stun. Warning roars that do no damage are also possible.
Bite - It has a powerful bite attack though the shape of it's head makes it hard to use in some areas.
Horn Stab - One of its most devastating attacks. It'll stab its enormous horn into the target. If it misses it may try again or tear trough the ground till it's head is out or it hits someone.
Charge - A running charge attack. It's hulking mass allows for it to take down squads of people at once.
Jump Charge - It'll back up to a favorable position and jump at the enemy. It'll primarily use this to land on the enemy or prey and pin them down.
Quick Slam - For those unaware that it's neck is pretty hard and try to slash it it'll drop it's spiked chin on the enemy in an attempt to crush them.
Slam Dive - Because it's so heavy it can perform a powerful slam. It'll fly up and then drop on the enemy also creating a shock-wave that'll blow away others.
Water Shots - It's got an organ for carrying HUGE amount of water. It can compress this organ to fire shots of water. The water is so highly compressed it explodes on impact. It fire them at intervals of 1-6 shots at a time but no higher than that.
Water Beam - One of its strongest attacks. Its water holding organ can fire a beam of compressed water. Even the strongest guards can't hold up. It is definitely an attack to be dodged and not blocked.
Paralyzing Gas - It can produce a potent paralyzing gas. In a manner similar to a Gravios. this water is made by adding a chemical to the water as it leaves the body.
Highly succeptable to Flash bombs unless it is in rage. The Gurenzeburu can be caught by most traps and is except Pitfall Traps. Even then it is a pretty smart creature so some traps may not work and some may not work more than once. However some traps become more effective when it is raging.
Powerful Water Sac - A monster's internal organ filled with water at explosive levels of compression. Can be used the same way a any other sac can but it can also be used for an emergency water supply. Though you should be very careful with it.
Colored Whetstones - Whetstones of various sizes and shapes. It easts these for improved digestion since it doesn't have the proper teeth for chewing. They are a good fashion statement because of the various colors they take due to stomach staining.
Wyvern Tears/Sobs - Though they have them they are rare as they pass through the body quickly after death. Only found by cutting open the tear ducts of the eyes. If that isn't done in the first post the tears will drain into the nasal passage then down the throat.
Brains/Brain Stem - Because it is so smart it has a large brain to go with it. Its brain stem and brain are rather large and the brain stem especially is thick thus perfect for particular applications.
A beautiful saddle worn by Balthasar. It is around the base of the neck towards the body. Though there is a whole saddle Loerlei rides side-saddle in a very aristocrat-like manner.
A metal collar won around the neck towards the base near jaw. Along with the attached chain this is how she controls Balthasar in flight and in water. The chain also is very sturdy so it doesn't break. The chain uses a screw in place hook-like attachment. Thus it can be removed at ease.
RP Sample: As a Fof and Mod whom already uses the Monsters account... Is this necessary?
Notes: Also you can check MH Wikia for info to make Gurenzeburu and use this as a basis for a public O-Gurenzeburu. This creature is assumed to be flying in the general vicinity when not being ridden by Lorelei. She calls hers "Balthasar" and plays with him often. It was originally obedient due to the Fatalis's orders but having spent time with her it is obedient of it's own will. Being her only real friend if seriously injured she taught to run as far as possible and leave her behind. She'll call for him later.
To me it seems fine, apart from one thing, which is only a suggestion... If this ones a mount could it be a little smaller for a hunter to ride on proply. (i cant look at spoilers, sry (Technical thing))
EDIT: After Toba kindly sent me the spoilers info in a PM i managed to find only one problem, when it does that Powerful scream it would harm the RPC that is riding it. But as a monster to fight its fine.
mmmm... if no one else has any problem, then I think that you can move this to the approved section, probably what has happened here is that mods and admins forgot to give their approval, just the same that happened with Lorelei, if they have any problem they can always revoke their approval z(thing that I don't think would happen).
You see?, nothing serious, and you answered him and he didn't complained about your answer. That for me is an approval, so you have my useless user approval to approve this, making your approval ethic and fair, and a mod or admin can revoke it anyway, just relax bro... your monster is ok and fair to RP with it...
Well he didn't really complain about the roar, be just pointed out something about it for you to take care about that, and you replied pointing out another thing, just as we did with your poisonous blood, but your actitude is loyable and I respect it, do as you wish. You could also use Lorelei without Balthasar...