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    PostSubject: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar   Sat Nov 06, 2010 3:53 pm

    Name: O-Gurenzeburu

    Size: 2700-2900 [Giant Class]

    Lineage: Flying Wyvern

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    Element: Water

    Status Inflicted: Paralyze, Stun, Waterblight, Iceblight,

    Weakness: Thunder, Fire

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    Gurenzeburu, A flying creature it has many tricks in its sleeve. However this is the personal mount of Lorelei. The O-Gurenzeburu has grown accustomed to the cold as well though that isn't its favorite place to be. Its large spiked horn is a deadly weapon. The Highland, in which Gurenzeburu lives, is known for its rapidly changing weather; the lightning storms can even damage Gurenzeburu, should it be struck directly. O-Gurenzeburu is not only an accomplished swimmer but a powerful flyer as well. With air capabilities similar to Kushala Daora. Primarily carnivorous but since O-Gurenzuburu has a stronger stomach it can eat other edibles when necessary. Its most dangerous attribute is its ability to learn. It is actually really smart comparable to a human in some cases.

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    Notes: Also you can check MH Wikia for info to make Gurenzeburu and use this as a basis for a public O-Gurenzeburu. This creature is assumed to be flying in the general vicinity when not being ridden by Lorelei. She calls hers "Balthasar" and plays with him often. It was originally obedient due to the Fatalis's orders but having spent time with her it is obedient of it's own will. Being her only real friend if seriously injured she taught to run as far as possible and leave her behind. She'll call for him later.

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    PostSubject: Re: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar   Tue Nov 09, 2010 4:36 pm

    To me it seems fine, apart from one thing, which is only a suggestion... If this ones a mount could it be a little smaller for a hunter to ride on proply. (i cant look at spoilers, sry (Technical thing))

    EDIT: After Toba kindly sent me the spoilers info in a PM i managed to find only one problem, when it does that Powerful scream it would harm the RPC that is riding it. But as a monster to fight its fine.
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    PostSubject: Re: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar   Tue Nov 09, 2010 5:48 pm

    As for the size thing it's only large because it's a higher species like how there are several variations of the Hermetaur all stronger than the last...

    And I know the scream would hurt the hunter thus why he won't be roaring when I'm in direct earshot anything stronger than a warning roar....

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    PostSubject: Re: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar   Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:14 pm

    mmmm... if no one else has any problem, then I think that you can move this to the approved section, probably what has happened here is that mods and admins forgot to give their approval, just the same that happened with Lorelei, if they have any problem they can always revoke their approval z(thing that I don't think would happen).
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    PostSubject: Re: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar   Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:17 pm

    BL never said he approved it though... He just asked about the size and roar...

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    PostSubject: Re: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar   Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:29 pm

    You see?, nothing serious, and you answered him and he didn't complained about your answer. That for me is an approval, so you have my useless user approval to approve this, making your approval ethic and fair, and a mod or admin can revoke it anyway, just relax bro... your monster is ok and fair to RP with it...
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    PostSubject: Re: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar   Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:34 pm

    I know but I prefer it this way...

    BL never approved the roar... As the roar is also part of the APP the APP isn't approved.

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    PostSubject: Re: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar   Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:51 pm

    Well he didn't really complain about the roar, be just pointed out something about it for you to take care about that, and you replied pointing out another thing, just as we did with your poisonous blood, but your actitude is loyable and I respect it, do as you wish. You could also use Lorelei without Balthasar...
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    PostSubject: Re: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar   Tue Mar 08, 2011 1:00 pm

    Thanks...

    They are a pair like two peas in a pod...

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    PostSubject: Re: Lorelei's O-Gurenzeburu - Balthasar   Wed Jul 06, 2011 11:57 am

    Now, with my new powers as a mod, I approve this ^^
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